hi you have a beautiful voice ^.^, this was an absolute pleasure listening to!
comments:
Something’s wrong, we can't let that be.
[id change that to can't let it be, even though "that" is 1 syllable the soft-A sound makes the phrase awkward. also, "it" is repeated in the lines below so there is consistency]
Don't want to regret acting the fool.
[change to "acting a fool". in general, "a"(or an) is a better article than "the" because it adds more emphasis on the constanant after it, F in this case. also, i believe a person makes "a fool of himsef" so its grammatically correct as well!]
While the path ahead's uncharted / We'll remain open-hearted
[love that line!!]
the only other comment i have is on the last line of hte chorus "talk it over and see". i like the unexpected intervals in that melodic line, however i think that the chorus right before the first instrumental might be more effective if it resolved expectedly into the solo, perhaps even just the last word "see" if it were done in spoken word rather than a specific pitch. gl!
