vocals, lyrics sound alright, but needs more instruments. a drum, some keyboards. right now you just have a bass, i presume? and it sounds a bit off rhythm with the vocal.
The lyric and the melody are good, but #1 is right. Maybe you are trying for some kind of very old, reverby sound, but it is annoying. Fix the mix or rearrange this.
Subject: R& B song about infidelity. The lyrics also address the now infamous sex addictiction claim. Video is the lyric sheet synchronized to the audio recording. Video URL: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SZp8u_vGgYo
