Cumulo Nimbus

It is hard to review the lyrics, but the music is definitely grunge/metal influenced.

That said, it is not bad, maybe a little dated, but hell, I am guilty of that as well.

As a band track I would say, go for it. As a track to sell, well maybe.

BTW, I love the Black Sabbath influenced solo.

Personally, I love the track, just not sure how commercial it is.