Boy I'm gonna treat you so right
Lyrics
I'm gonna gonna treat you right so right boy
You're on my mind day and night
I'm gonna take you all the way
I keep you on my mind all day all night all day
Let me get close to you
Closer boy ooh' you're so damn find bout to lose my mind
Gonna take you for a ride
Better hold on tight
I promise not to bite don't be so so shy
You know you want it stop acting so anti
Could be love feels so right
Only time will tell let's just keep things light
When I think of you and the smell of your cologne
It drives me crazy baby I wanna rush back home
Yes you got me I never felt like this
Serenaded. Marinated in complete bliss
I'm gonna gonna treat you right so right boy
You're on my mind day and night
I'm gonna take you all the way
I keep you on my mind all day all night all day
Take it easy just let go
You relax while I put on a show
Come with me I'm gonna show you how to fly
I got this no need to worry, I will be your guide
Let's go out, High-light the town
Hit up some clubs and turn it upside down
Let's dance dance dance dance dance put on a show
Feel the beat Feel the heat let's tear up the floor
I'm gonna gonna treat you right so right boy
You're on my mind day and night
I'm gonna take you all the way boy
I keep you on my mind all day all night all day
Let go and feel the vibe
Relax get lost close your eyes
Until there's no one else around boy
Cause the night belongs to us, it's our private playground
I'm gonna gonna treat you right so right boy
You're on my mind day and night
I'm gonna take you all the way boy
I keep you on my mind all day all night all day
Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah
Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah Nah
I'm gonna gonna treat you right so right
Reviews
I agree... some type of drums, even if it was just congas or something would have kept the rhythm a little more tight...
I know you were going for the acoustic feel, but the rhythm just wasn't there...good concept though...keep working it out!!
vocals, lyrics sound alright, but needs more instruments. a drum, some keyboards. right now you just have a bass, i presume? and it sounds a bit off rhythm with the vocal.
The lyric and the melody are good, but #1 is right. Maybe you are trying for some kind of very old, reverby sound, but it is annoying. Fix the mix or rearrange this.